Well I updated the storyboard by putting more actions in. Here it is:
I probably would have benefitted putting even more actions in though. The drawings are a bit inconsistent too and that annoys me, but as it is only the storyboard I shouldn't be spending too much time on it. I will be posting the final character designs of the mongoose and the snake very soon so stay tuned.
This is great stuff. Maybe some timings could have improved the overall image.
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